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Tell Me

By acidcrys

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tell me what you're whispering behind closed lipswill it scar like leather whips?show me what you're seeing behind closed eyesis it a place where everyone flies?teach me what you're thinking behind your skullwill i find what makes you fall?give me what you're feeling behind your skinwill i be able to stay within?Tell me why do I die when youre in painis it because you're driving me sane?Tell me why cant i breathe when you speakis it because you know im weak..?Tell me why I cant get you out of my brain...youve seeped in like hard pouring rain..the only real problems Ive had with this piece is. in the 3rd part people say that 'Skull' and 'fall' dont rhyme, but with my accent they do.. my skull sounds like skall not skool (or however else anyone says it) but I like this poem so .. just say skull my way damnit. Written September 20th, 2001 © on Sep 20 2001 12:02 PM PST   0 • 8

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"tell me what you're whispering behind closed lipswill it scar like leather whips?show me what you're seeing behind closed eyesis it a place where everyone flies?teach me what you're thinking behind your skullwill i find what makes you fall?give me what you're feeling behind your skinwill i be able to stay within?Tell me why do I die when youre in painis it because you're driving me sane?Tell me why cant i breathe when you speakis it because you know im weak..?Tell me why I cant get you out of my brain...youve seeped in like hard pouring rain..the only real problems Ive had with this piece is. in the 3rd part people say that 'Skull' and 'fall' dont rhyme, but with my accent they do.. my skull sounds like skall not skool (or however else anyone says it) but I like this poem so .. just say skull my way damnit...."

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