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By acidcrys

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Why do you make me feel this way-Yearning to die each and every day?And still, I reach out to you with open arms,Even when I know, it is you who harms.Why do you take all of it away-when its already hard for it to stay?Still, I brush away your tears,Even when its you that causes my fears.Why do you pull at my strings until they fray-leaving my shattered soul where it lay?Still, I hold you close to me,Even when I know, I am nothing you want me to be.((why can't you do the same for me?))this piece is older.. (as you can tell by the rhyming) and it was dedicated to my father. Thats why it ends so abruptly- most pieces of mine that do, are dedicated to him, so I guess its just hard for me to continue with them... Written October 21st, 2001 © on Oct 21 2001 11:14 AM PST   0 • 8

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"Why do you make me feel this way-Yearning to die each and every day?And still, I reach out to you with open arms,Even when I know, it is you who harms.Why do you take all of it away-when its already hard for it to stay?Still, I brush away your tears,Even when its you that causes my fears.Why do you pull at my strings until they fray-leaving my shattered soul where it lay?Still, I hold you close to me,Even when I know, I am nothing you want me to be.((why can't you do the same for me?))this piece is older.. (as you can tell by the rhyming) and it was dedicated to my father. Thats why it ends so abruptly- most pieces of mine that do, are dedicated to him, so I guess its just hard for me to continue with them......"

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