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Making Love (18+)

By bdgrey

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

First of all I assume that since you're reading this, you already know that this is an erotic poem. Personally, I don't care how old you are, but I just want you to know that if this kind of display for sexually oriented poetry offends you, then please don't read this. I'm not trying to cause trouble, it's just a poem. Secondly, this will be full of imagery, so I hope you either brought some lotion, or ice. Just kidding. :) They look into each other's anxious eyes, knowing that what will happen may change their lives. The love they share is pure and true, yet scared and unsure of what to do. He asks if she is okay with this, and she smiles timidly, but the time has come. These two lovers will share each other, forming a connection meant only for these two souls. They lay beside each other on their bed, heads rested comfortably, they stare into each other's eyes, knowing that now, not later, is the time. The clothes had long ago come off, as they were content with laying naked, but that all too soon passed. He reaches down, to her perfectly tanned legs, and feels their softness, rivaling pure satin. The knee on her right is touched with coarse hand, and he moves up to her most sacred of lands. The skin their is soft without any trace of hair, so he plays with her lips as they slide in and out, of his busy, large fingers. She moans in a whisper as if begging for more, and sensing her pleasure he enters her wetland. Inside it is smoother, than frictionless ice, and her tightness is like a velvet vice. He slides in and out with the greatest of ease, fully erect, he now begs for relief. He suddenly realizes what sits up above, and moves his hand forward, to massage for both of their pleasure. Her breasts are firm, more than a handful, and her nipples, like rain drops, stand hard and alert. He squeezes them gently, and then tries it harder, she continues to moan from all the attention. He kisses her lips, and she kisses back, and then he moves down to her thin, delicate neck. Proceeding on downward, he crosses over her right nipple, engulfing completely, in his now tightly lipped mouth. His journey not over, his tongue moves to her naval, and he flicks it twice, just for good measure. Not forgetting the purpose of this quest, he moves further south to her soft and soaked nest. Spreading her lips open, he catches eye of her clit, and with his wicked tongue, gives it a sly little flick. Her body convulses at this strange new feeling, and almost comes right then, but manages to control herself. The feeling of his warm and soft mouth, covering something so far down south, is comforting and erotic, and causes her joy. He sucks in and her lips soon follow, and strikes her clit all in one motion. He sends in two of his fingers, to aid his mouth, in eating her out. She reaches for his shoulder and taps it a few times, it is becoming too much, and she wants him to go along on the ride. He moves his body up, but his fingers still move, and in one swift motion, they are now one instead of two. Her body is hot and her cheeks are quite flushed, as their naked chests touch, it gives him a rush, and he works much harder. She grabs him and holds him their by his back, as he moves with rhythm, while she arches and moans. Their bodies are becoming soaked in each other's sweat, yet they notice little, except for this act of sex. He has now propped himself up, and now looks deep into her eyes, turning her even more on. He glances down below her face, and there he sees, her twins bouncing with glee. The way she feels when inside her, is nothing like he has ever felt before. It is wet, hot, tight and above all, soft. The feel of him thrusting into her so deep, is one without description, his size and rhythm, just cannot be beat. His body begins to tire from this sexual exursion, but he continues to move on, and she continues to moan, and now helps him out. Then with a rush, his insides erupt, and he unleashes all the love he has, inside her. At that very same instant, she gave one final jolt, and her whole waist, stomach, and groin, took a trip to heaven. She could feel his pulsating motion, as each little drop was released in her ocean. He then looks at her with nothing but truth in his eyes, and says "I love you", and she too replies, "I love you too", and then together they lay, happily married, and they finally fell asleep together, for their first, but not last, time.This is their honeymoon night. Not bad for a honeymoon. I hope you enjoyed this, and I hope it wasn't too tasteless. Thank you. Written December 13th, 2001 © on Dec 12 2001 04:19 PM PST   0 • 16

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"First of all I assume that since you're reading this, you already know that this is an erotic poem. Personally, I don't care how old you are, but I just want you to know that if this kind of display for sexually oriented poetry offends you, then please don't read this. I'm not trying to cause trouble, it's just a poem. Secondly, this will be full of imagery, so I hope you either brought some lotion, or ice. Just kidding. :) ..."

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