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My Brother's Poem

By bdgrey

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This one is my little brother's. He wanted me to post it because he wanted to know what everyone thought of it. Thanks. I have fallen in love again, with someone so perfect, so true. I pine for the chance, just to hold you, to be with you. Your beauty is that, of which words cannot describe. Your life is so precious, that I would do anything so that you survive. You are God's masterpiece. Your as precious as the air we breathe, and the water we drink. Your beauty can eradicate the darkness, that surrounds my heart, and light the universe, if all the stars were to die. Your warmth and gentleness, is that of which God can't even describe. You are perfect in every way, and I am lucky, to have fallen in love with someone so great. For I do love, and I would do anything to be with you. Written November 25th, 2001 © on Nov 24 2001 05:06 PM PST   0 • 8

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