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By Brinneall

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when everything falls awaylike rain on a window,slowly rolling out of meoutside where the wind blows freeI look to the sky to find a piece of methat I lost to the starsand the clouds above          big, black rolling cloudsthey take away the sunshine  [bright bright sun]and make the darkness come again.all it does is blind me,and when I can't see, I fall    [i fall so long and far.]  and when I finally stop falling  I hit the ground so hard,  the only light I see is the stars above my head  gently calling me away from this place    gently calling me home...-Jada Marie Andrews © on Aug 26 2001 10:32 AM PST   0 • 12

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"when everything falls awaylike rain on a window,slowly rolling out of meoutside where the wind blows freeI look to the sky to find a piece of methat I lost to the starsand the clouds above          big, black rolling cloudsthey take away the sunshine  [bright bright sun]and make the darkness come again.all it does is blind me,and when I can't see, I fall    [i fall so long and far.]  and when I finally stop falling  I hit the ground so hard,  the only light I see is the stars above my head  gently calling me away from this place    gently calling me home...-Jada Marie Andrews © on Aug 26 2001 10:32 AM PST   0 • 12..."

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