Ocean of tears
By Channa
There's an ocean of tears in this heart of minetears of joy and sorrow often enter-wineit's a secret place only known to mesadness and loneliness always hold the keyno one besides me knows the secret placejust a glimpse of it when looking at my facethis ocean of tears is seen thru my eyesA shade a bit lighter from your many lieshow could someone as small as meshed so many tears to create a seaevery crystal drop contain a storytale of grief broken hope useless tragedyeach night I return to my secret shoreI stare at my ocean thru an unseen dooras I shed one more tear for the loveless nightI've no one to kis me or to hold me tightas this tear drop falls I feel the rippleFrom this ocean right down to my soul.I need help with my English, as in forming the right sentences in the right context. Thank you for your help, you guys :) Written October 7th, 2001 © on Oct 07 2001 03:11 PM PST 18 • 0 • 1
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"There's an ocean of tears in this heart of minetears of joy and sorrow often enter-wineit's a secret place only known to mesadness and loneliness always hold the keyno one besides me knows the secret placejust a glimpse of it when looking at my facethis ocean of tears is seen thru my eyesA shade a bit lighter from your many lieshow could someone as small as meshed so many tears to create a seaevery crystal drop contain a storytale of grief broken hope useless tragedyeach night I return to my secret shoreI stare at my ocean thru an unseen dooras I shed one more tear for the loveless nightI've no one to kis me or to hold me tightas this tear drop falls I feel the rippleFrom this ocean right down to my soul.I need help with my English, as in forming the right sentences in the right context. Thank you for your help, you guys :)..."