Love Verses War ~ Mars/Venus
By Desdemona
~Mars~ Broken picture of my love Broken glass like my heart Free - fall in crimson Through my mind Tearing me a p a r t I call on mars Through my tears,, Through the stars To avenge my shattered dreams My dear blood - god Tear him apart Tear him apart at the seams..... ~ Venus ~ My anger passes I dry my tears I remember our love throughout the years I pray to Venus I beg her for forgiveness Her love like the sea will keep me strong forever My sweet Sea-foam Goddess Watch over my heart Put the pieces of my life back together Love back in my heart Love back in my heart like before....When I was 19 I took a creative writing class. Our teacher made us listen to mood music. We had to write a poem while listening in 4 minutes about Mars and Venus. The music was titled Mars and Venus. This is what I had Created. Thought I would share this since it's probably one of my first writings ever. Written February 9th, 2002 © on Feb 09 2002 05:32 AM PST, Lee Gillilan 0 • 10
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