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By GratefulGurl

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

Wide awake, Yet in a daze. I look upon, Your smiling face. Makes me happy, To know your around. What a wonderful friend, I have finaly found. Funny how we became closer, Through a specific pozer. Makes me wonder, Makes me think. Makes me wonder, If shes a jinx. Amongst the living, Amongst the dead. The question is, Where do you lay your head? For if the "dead" were "alive" Where would you thrive? We'd have the pozer fooled, Always making up new rules. She'd feel like an outsider, She'd feel like a fraud, She'd feel out of place, and unresolved. You've left her unexplained, Standing out in the rain. No need to compensate, because everything has already changed. Written March 15th, 2002 © on Mar 15 2002 08:08 AM PST   0 • 9

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