Autumn Rain
By LadyLeBlanc
The autumn breeze lifted gently my hair. Raindrops fell and mingled with my tears. Not long ago this is where you left. I must stay and remember you forever. It grows late, the sun has set for us, and I live in twilight eternal. Do you weep as I must? Would it be better if you returned? Please, come back and we'll write a different ending. Alas, you won't and all I have is autumn rain.2000, I know it needs some work. I have tried for a long time to make this one better, but I can't seem to think of anything. Any suggestions? Written December 16th, 2001 © on Dec 16 2001 01:45 PM PST, Kaleigh Naylor 18 • 0 • 1
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"The autumn breeze..."