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Sweet Vengeance

By Lunar

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A castle that floats above the sea, is an omen to beware,the evil ruler has now returned, and the end is growing near.His fortress he has guarded, by a dragon's fiery breath,and he who dares to venture in, will surely meet ones death.In the kingdom, there is a knight, whose heart shines pure and true,he'll save the land that he loves so dear, and the wrath he will undo.The hateful ruler who lurks within, his castle in the sky,is unaware this is the day, that we shall see him die.Along side the knight, two fellow men, to aide him in his quest,A mage who holds his holy staff, and a prince who bares the crest.Their wait for darkness will help disguise, any shadows on the wall,allowing the mage to raise his staff, and makes the dragon fall.The prince grabs hold the golden crest, and aims it at the door,they  walk into an evil world, they had never seen before.The demon ruler spins around, his eyes glow bloody red,the knight recalls her lovely face, before this hell had struck her dead.Held in his arms that horrid night, was his true love frail and weak,he pulls her close, and whispers soft, sweet vengeance I shall seek.He raised the sword above his head, then plunged it through his soul,I take your life without a tear, for the true love you had stole.Although a life he took away, his heart could not feel grief,he pulled the sword straight out from death, and slid it in it's sheath.He bows his head, then walks outside, and he stares up in the sky,he knew the time had finally come, that he had to say good-bye,The mage now calls the holy ones, to reward the hero knight,through grave yard mist, they all stood still, as she came into thier sight.There she stood in a wedding gown, and the tears dripped down her face,and caught the colors within her eyes, till the moment the embraced.From the shore, they stood and watched,  as the evil disappeared,and drown the hate they all had felt, and all had learned to fear.They took a breath of their brand new world, and walked east into the sun,a glimmer of hope, within their eyes, now that sweet vegeance finally won.You should set up a Fantasy section. Written September 2nd, 2001 © on Sep 01 2001 07:47 PM PST   0 • 10

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"A castle that floats above the sea, is an omen to beware,the evil ruler has now returned, and the end is growing near.His fortress he has guarded, by a dragon's fiery breath,and he who dares to venture in, will surely meet ones death.In the kingdom, there is a knight, whose heart shines pure and true,he'll save the land that he loves so dear, and the wrath he will undo.The hateful ruler who lurks within, his castle in the sky,is unaware this is the day, that we shall see him die.Along side the knight, two fellow men, to aide him in his quest,A mage who holds his holy staff, and a prince who bares the crest.Their wait for darkness will help disguise, any shadows on the wall,allowing the mage to raise his staff, and makes the dragon fall.The prince grabs hold the golden crest, and aims it at the door,they  walk into an evil world, they had never seen before.The demon ruler spins around, his eyes glow bloody red,the knight recalls her lovely face, before this hell had struck her dead.Held in his arms that horrid night, was his true love frail and weak,he pulls her close, and whispers soft, sweet vengeance I shall seek.He raised the sword above his head, then plunged it through his soul,I take your life without a tear, for the true love you had stole.Although a life he took away, his heart could not feel grief,he pulled the sword straight out from death, and slid it in it's sheath.He bows his head, then walks outside, and he stares up in the sky,he knew the time had finally come, that he had to say good-bye,The mage now calls the holy ones, to reward the hero knight,through grave yard mist, they all stood still, as she came into thier sight.There she stood in a wedding gown, and the tears dripped down her face,and caught the colors within her eyes, till the moment the embraced.From the shore, they stood and watched,  as the evil disappeared,and drown the hate they all had felt, and all had learned to fear.They took a breath of their brand new world, and walked east into the sun,a glimmer of hope, within their eyes, now that sweet vegeance finally won.You should set up a Fantasy section...."

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