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By midnite raver

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i feel so good, all alone, i save the world, from the cold, i taste the sun, makes me whole, i like my shade, with my souls, drowning with the reasons for a purpose, who are all these faces on these bottles? they have left me empty on a friday, i hope i wake up someday to be something, i steer my ships, open seas, dont close your eyes, open please, i fly like kites, without strings, as i create, from nothing, dont be afraid to become nothing, i have seen a snail crawl to heaven, i have danced with things meant to destroy me, yet i am still an ocean crashing for you. 10-16-01 Written October 16th, 2001 © on Oct 16 2001 05:26 AM PST, midnite_raver   0 • 10

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