Skip to content
Linespedia

The End to a Perfect Day

By Mouse Poet

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

As the night slowly approaches The two sit side by side And feel the blades of grass tickle their bare feet As they swing in the silent breeze Watching the sun sink Below the horizon while talking about simple little nothings. With the birth of the gentle starlight A new conversation emerges with the naming of names And drawing of the pictures On the magnificent canvas in the sky the night creatures sing their praises. Later as they retire To their haven of completeness They immerse their feelings In the warm water of relaxation With bubbles of laughter about the thoughts Of things they have done And yearn to do. As the time slips deeper into the night The man melts the stresses of her worries And fears of her past into the sheets of comfort and peace While her thoughts grasp for an eternity Of hope and desire for her once childhood fantasies With the closing of the moment They embrace each other in their arms And enter into a world of make-believe Where the thoughts and expressions Of these two will forever live With peace and freedom until one day When it will all become a reality. Written January 6th, 2002 © on Jan 06 2002 02:54 PM PST   18 • 0 • 8

AI analysis available. Enable JavaScript to interact.

About this line

"As the night slowly approaches..."

Attribution & Rights

Author:Mouse Poet

Source:AllPoetry

"As the night slowly approaches..." by Mouse Poet

For usage rights, copyright concerns, or to report an issue with this content, please visit our Copyright & Report page.

Classified Tags

Related lines

"Two bodiesfriends lovers mates for lifeor so they thought.Differencesaromas of the paststench of the present.Hear the children cryWondering why. Written June 1st, 2001 © on Nov 12 2001 01:34 PM PST  ..."

"The night,dark and heavy,weighed upon my brow.The concerns of the eveningwere many,though one stood outabove them all.It was the passingof time.There was nothing I could doto stop it.All my attemptsen..."

"When I look at you, I see delicate bubbles dancing and gliding on a soft, gentle breeze when I, myself, am a child playing in the warm gentle sun. When I look at you, I see sweet smelling flowers pai..."

"'Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder' And when I gaze into your eyes, I see something more beautiful than dewdrops, Glistening on the petals of an early morning rose. I see something more beautiful ..."

"Please draw me awayfrom your shelf once againand wipe away the dustfrom my worn past.Let me open and expose myinnermost feelings to youand let us again become onein your thoughts and imagination.Let y..."

"The Mood. The night was young and the moon stood slightly over the horizion, yielding the night sky to the dancers of old. A warm soft breeze caressed our shoulders, sending a wave of relaxation thro..."

Mouse Poet

About Mouse Poet

Full Bibliography
Continue Reading

"Two bodiesfriends lovers mates for lifeor so they ..."

Weekly Poetic Insight

Join our literary Sanctuary

Get the most inspiring lines, poetic analysis, and secret shayaris delivered to your inbox every Sunday.