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A Castle Falls

By pilo

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Spinning in circles on this terror-go-round moving so fast it dulls sight and sound I hear your pitiful sobbing I'm sorry... I feel so weak I want to reach out and hold you But I can't raise my arm or speak Staring eyes now see memories gratefully I picture your face as an angel reaching to hold me a movement of slow motion grace An army lays siege to my body I do struggle with this foe must keep this home defended Please Help Me... Don't let me go I'm locked inside this castle that once stood proud and tall but with this relentless onslaught Is it inevitable.. I should fall? Zero hour comes to taunt me so tired.. so fragile and old my strength must last till morning If not..(cough!).. the end..will b.... Written September 24th, 2001 © on Nov 06 2001 02:11 AM PST   0 • 1

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