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So Subtle

By redmoon

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The obsenities, they've ruined my serenity, I've never noticed so much-pain, until now. The dirty looks, you've attached to me, just because I'm different it doesn't make you god like. So keep your judgements subtle, 'cause I don't care enough for them to stand out. Keep the loud colors of your lies to a minimum, oh, because my favorite color is black. My favorite color is black, not just 'cause I'm depressed but, 'cause you piss me off, you always screamed at me, you've made me ashamed to even know your name. And I've heard it all before, I can't stand it anymore! You've thrown me out, and pushed me to the ground, and the last was the last time. You're gone. Gone Gone without a trace. So subtle remains your embrace. Apology unaccepted. Written January 9th, 2002 © on Jan 09 2002 08:04 AM PST   0 • 9

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