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By Semanticcongratic

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All                                                 you             had                                                                     to                         do was                                                       open your                                                                     eyes                           Why?05/??/01, is it a poem? its one of my favorites just because the reader digests each word, and has to because of the form. Its impossible to read it without thinking "all" , "you" .... etc... in this way the last line hopefully leaves them wondering what the poem is about. Its just one of my favoirtes I wanted to submit Written March 29th, 2002 © on Mar 29 2002 05:41 AM PST, Jeremy M Olson    18 • 0 • 1

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