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Cold Flames

By tigerlilly

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

Time swept through our lives, shutting out love's light. Leaving only snuffed candles, darkness cooled. Hearts waxed cold, wicks dampened, by winter’s storms, leaving shadowed corners, where night still rules.please critique...first attempt at tetractys...i am not sure if this is correct for a double...and they are much harder than i thought...well, at least for me... :) ...but i cannot resist something new... Written March 6th, 2002 © on Mar 06 2002 09:37 AM PST   0 • 1

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