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love's prime factor

By tigerlilly

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i count up at days end all the little things you do pack the kid's lunch wash the car buy the dinner for two and as i see the total acts that number our love i thank you darling from my heart my number one i'm thinking of you know i'm not keeping score but we've had our bad days when problems subtracted from the sum of loving ways but we drew close and held on stood together side by side though the cold winds rushed past our house we did not divide now i'm counting the blessings remembering joys and tears as our love multiplied bringing children through the years and as i see the total acts that number our love i thank you darling from my heart my number one i'm thinking of i'll stop now the growing list for no matter what the path i can see my number one as the prime factor in my mathcomments and critiques welcomed Written January 27th, 2002 © on Jan 27 2002 03:45 AM PST   0 • 8

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