Venetian Blinded (Haiku)
By tigerlilly
Silent sun-sabers slashing slanting slits slightly sundering sound sight.all comments and critiques welcomed, as the evening sun pours through the mini-blinds... which happen to be tilted at just the right angle for the light to enter these dark-room expanded pupils, thereby piercing the optic nerves with calculated intensity. Written February 20th, 2002 © on Feb 20 2002 09:20 AM PST 0 • 10
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"Silent sun-sabers..."