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Two Words You Said

By BrokenWings

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

I must be lost in a spiralFor the pain to come back the second it leavesFlowing like a river of glassEvery cut adds to the hurtI can only blankly stareIn quiet thoughtIn bitter regretCrying for your returnI'm vulnerable to you aloneYou struck me, and I fellOnly you can pull me outI doubt you'll come to do itTwo words was all you said to meTwo words was all it took You've pierced me though the heartAnd I think the scar will stay foreverI don't know what this is.. DEFINITELY not poetry, but feelings.. Popped into my head right after one of the three most important people in the world to me said something with the intention of hurting me.. and succeeded. Written November 29th, 2001 © on Nov 29 2001 07:42 AM PST   18 • 0 • 1

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"I must be lost in a spiralFor the pain to come back the second it leavesFlowing like a river of glassEvery cut adds to the hurtI can only blankly stareIn quiet thoughtIn bitter regretCrying for your returnI'm vulnerable to you aloneYou struck me, and I fellOnly you can pull me outI doubt you'll come to do itTwo words was all you said to meTwo words was all it took You've pierced me though the heartAnd I think the scar will stay foreverI don't know what this is.. DEFINITELY not poetry, but feelings.. Popped into my head right after one of the three most important people in the world to me said something with the intention of hurting me.. and succeeded...."

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