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Life Rise On The Sunset

By debbie

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The comfort of you laying against my chest soothes me. The rhythm of your steady breaths parallel mine and together we are one. Surrendered to the limitless sky above us every thought I once had, and I now feel weightless and free. Peace hovering my mind commands me to feel nothing and therefore I do not hear also. It has surpassed my understanding, has enveloped me; as does the waves of an ocean swallowing the edge of the timid shore. As I stroke your fine hair to the harmonious movement of our breathing bodies, you rest still upon me. I lay here immersed in you and with my eyes closed I watch life rise on the sunset.Please give me your opinions especially on content......thanks alot-deb Written March 10th, 2002 © on Mar 10 2002 11:01 AM PST   0 • 8

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