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Succumb

By debbie

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Silently with my eyes I beg you to succumb. In harmony with my heart you run to me. Quivering with excitement the sudden chill has stolen my thoughts. Anticipating your warm, gentle breath lingering on the nape of my neck I still weaken as always it pleasantly surprises me. As you wear my desires so lovely upon your countenance the deep, crimsom rose pedals that sleep around my heart when you are gone now bloom with love eternal as you are here. My eyes beg you; you succumb to me, your breath touches me; I bloom for you. My wish upon time would be this moment everlasting. For solely does my delicate, beating heart bloom for you, and only a sense of you need make me succumb.any suggestions on form would be greatly appreciated...thanks debbie Written March 20th, 2002 © on Mar 20 2002 07:51 AM PST   0 • 8

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