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care enough

By donnamarie

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if i was not alone,why did they ignore the note?scotch tape forcing itto cling onto my door.it was still wetafter i bathed itwith my tears.i waited for three eternities,hoping they couldcare enough to knock;that they wouldbreak through the barrier and knock the pillsfrom my trembling hand.DO NOT BE ALARMED!!! this is old news. years old. everyone involved is okay. that is my disclaimer. thank you. Written November 28th, 2001 © on Nov 28 2001 12:50 PM PST   18 • 0 • 1

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"if i was not alone,why did they ignore the note?scotch tape forcing itto cling onto my door.it was still wetafter i bathed itwith my tears.i waited for three eternities,hoping they couldcare enough to knock;that they wouldbreak through the barrier and knock the pillsfrom my trembling hand.DO NOT BE ALARMED!!! this is old news. years old. everyone involved is okay. that is my disclaimer. thank you...."

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