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luke

By donnamarie

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What he did was wrong,and everyone knows it.Yet you don't condemn him.If you do, you don't show it.He thought my body was a toy.One that he could play with at his will.I screamed and I fought,but he still got his thrill.I'm hurt and confused.I cry at the thought,of his hands where they shouldn't be.But you think it's okay because 'he's hot'.I hope you get raped,I hope you get hurt.So you can screamas he rips off your shirt.You can have the nightmares,and you can bear the scars.You can try to forget what happened,hoping on the stars.The words you've spoken are the most insensitive I've heard.You'll think differently when he corners you,and you feel trapped like a wounded bird.yes, this is autobiographical, and the experienced screwed me up for quite a while. this was my attempt at expressing how it feels to go through an attack and have people question you, or justify because they found the attacker attractive. it is a pain that cannot be expressed by words... Written October 5th, 2001 © on Oct 05 2001 11:17 AM PST   17 • 0 • 1

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"What he did was wrong,and everyone knows it.Yet you don't condemn him.If you do, you don't show it.He thought my body was a toy.One that he could play with at his will.I screamed and I fought,but he still got his thrill.I'm hurt and confused.I cry at the thought,of his hands where they shouldn't be.But you think it's okay because 'he's hot'.I hope you get raped,I hope you get hurt.So you can screamas he rips off your shirt.You can have the nightmares,and you can bear the scars.You can try to forget what happened,hoping on the stars.The words you've spoken are the most insensitive I've heard.You'll think differently when he corners you,and you feel trapped like a wounded bird.yes, this is autobiographical, and the experienced screwed me up for quite a while. this was my attempt at expressing how it feels to go through an attack and have people question you, or justify because they found the attacker attractive. it is a pain that cannot be expressed by words......"

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