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Elementary

By edenbak

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Fast freezing faces, like old Roman statues with eyes void of pupils, speak like nails on a chalkboard to ignorant children.I really don't know what inspired this one.... I really don't know what to think about this one... To be honest, its one of my first! Written March 17th, 2002 © on Mar 17 2002 02:17 AM PST   0 • 10

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