I came to you
By katraylor
I came to you my heart in hand, a cloud above my head. you looked at me most thoughtfully and parted lips, and said, "I loved you once, and once again, and now the magic's dead. Now go away and stay away." and so I did, and quickly died.I'm not sure about some of the words. maybe the second "now" should be "so," and maybe "and now" should be "but now." can't decide. Written February 28th, 2002 © on Mar 01 2002 02:42 AM PST 10 • 0 • 1
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"I came to you..."