Fear
By Monkei
Turning every which way I see nothing but blurs I stop, look, and see nothing I hear something in the distance But do not comprehend it I feel something too.. Pain maybe.. It's hard to tell It could just be desolation... It's been too long since I let myself feel pain.. It's been too long since I let my heart thaw... But now the water droplets are coming. I fear the melting I fear the feelings that may come with it.. I fear emotion..This one came out close to what I was feeling. I don't like the way the title portrays it though. And suggestions? I am still desperate for tips on the poems themselves. Please! Be overly critical! Written March 17th, 2002 © on Mar 16 2002 04:26 PM PST, Katie 0 • 10
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"Turning every which way I see nothing but blurs..."