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Rain

By Monkei

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We were so in love Every smile, every touch Made a little more of us But lately the skys, Have been clouding over And now the rain is pouring down Each time the thunder clashes And the lightning mars the sky I feel like you pull a little more away. I don't know what to do I just want desperately, To hold on to you. But now every time she smiles, I see you smiling back, And I know I am losing you If you are not already lost.I know what I am trying to express here, but I am not quite sure how to do it. I had everything in my mind, it is just the putting it on paper part that gave me trouble. Any suggestions are MORE than welcome. Written March 17th, 2002 © on Mar 16 2002 03:18 PM PST, Katie   18 • 0 • 8

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