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A Fleeting Heart

By Netsubo

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All this water pouring over my body...Dragging me downI cant..moveI cant..speakI cant..breatheSo pathetic..Me, im so patheticI cant stand up under this rainI cant move out from under itI cant escape this trapIm so lost...My mind is goneIt flew away from meMy heart dragged it alongWishing wings would form on my backWishing i could find them again..Wishing to bring back everythingI hate this so much..My feelings change with every new momentMy heart flies back and forthNot letting me catch itI cant live like this...Id rather die than have no heartId rather take my own lifeThan continue like thisFilled with such...EmptinessThere is no heartache...Sorrow...Pain..Suffering..Torture..Just emptinessI want to end this..But how? Written September 25th, 2001 © on Sep 25 2001 12:43 PM PST   18 • 0 • 10

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"All this water pouring over my body...Dragging me downI cant..moveI cant..speakI cant..breatheSo pathetic..Me, im so patheticI cant stand up under this rainI cant move out from under itI cant escape this trapIm so lost...My mind is goneIt flew away from meMy heart dragged it alongWishing wings would form on my backWishing i could find them again..Wishing to bring back everythingI hate this so much..My feelings change with every new momentMy heart flies back and forthNot letting me catch itI cant live like this...Id rather die than have no heartId rather take my own lifeThan continue like thisFilled with such...EmptinessThere is no heartache...Sorrow...Pain..Suffering..Torture..Just emptinessI want to end this..But how?..."

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