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My Lost Chance

By Netsubo

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As I passed a tattered soul.. I quietly revered it And thought.. How not much is different I see my desire in the reflection.. Not the true sky And realize... All those dreams are fake A chance.. Was given Yet was thrown away.. In my stupor Those blue eyes are still so clear And then.. A shock of uneasiness And my actions falter once more.. Why.. Every time I see the light at the end of the tunnel Do I blind myself.. To the truth? That chance was so.. Wonderful For once, I may have done something right But it was only me.. Who held my tongue No-one to blame But myself.. Can’t believe.. I let another, Slip through the cracks Can’t believe Can’t believe, I felt a little more hope.. And dashed it away In a moment I’d love to go back.. And add a few simple words But.. too far away now And I’m left here.. once more..i dont like this one all that much.. but hey, its what came out.. maybe since the feeling felt so empty.. Written February 18th, 2002 © on Feb 18 2002 12:16 PM PST   18 • 0 • 1

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