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Smoke In My Own Night Sky

By Netsubo

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

Burning embers... A smoke trail twisting off into the night sky The sweet smell of jasmine fills my heart A slow stare across the star lit sky... Stars..  flying in the night Dancing.. putting me into a trance.. Pulling my mind away from past pains Replacing the sharp steel with warm wool Replacing the shards of glass with clear vision Staring at the smoke again.. Wishing I lived in it Constantly traveling upward Towards the stars... Towards the moon Towards what I love The freedom of open space No pain.. No hurt..  No sorrow.. Just pure freedom I would look straight into the sun Asking for one thing.. Written September 17th, 2001 © on Sep 17 2001 02:22 PM PST   0 • 12

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