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'My Style! My Way!'

By WindDancer J

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“My Style! My Way!” Your poems are too long; “I” write short ones. You have too many rhymes; “MY” style has none. You add to much personal stuff; I don’t like those. You march to your own beat, the way you compose.     ….so I change, then I get! Your poems are way too short, and don’t say much. The words don’t sound right, they’re not balanced enough. You should try it “MY” way, because others do. Must you march to your own beat, why must you be you?     …..So I decide I write from MY heart, to please myself. And share it with others, who write just as well. Not looking for STAR RATING or acceptance from you. Just want to convey thoughts, emotions, and experience true.       …So here are my thoughts So you don’t like my poems, please save your breath. I don’t care to hear that “YOUR” style is the best. I march to my own beat, “MY” style I’ll not amend. My style is my own, try to understand this message I send. Written November 16th, 2001 © on Nov 15 2001 07:14 PM PST   0 • 10

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