Haiku(s) 6
By Brad Kelly
A rock sits, gentlypolished by water and timeA rough thing made smoothThe saddest part isI love everyone I seeAnd am still lonely.Smells sweeter than rose.Delicate like a dew dropHer soul as lovely.Each stanza is an independent haiku, they are not related ( OK maybe a little).The last one is a little too sappy for me. Written October 8th, 2001 © on Oct 08 2001 12:32 AM PST 10 • 0 • 8
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"A rock sits, gentlypolished by water and timeA rough thing made smoothThe saddest part isI love everyone I seeAnd am still lonely.Smells sweeter than rose.Delicate like a dew dropHer soul as lovely.Each stanza is an independent haiku, they are not related ( OK maybe a little).The last one is a little too sappy for me...."