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Steal the laughter from my cloudy mind steal the love in this heart of mine take away the tears from my confused eyes take away this mouth that has caused all the lies. It doesn't matter... I come to you with no armor I come defenseless to stand before you. Take away my soul that has made me fall take away my heart which to you it calls steal the light that shines inside steal the secrets in which I can't hide It doesn't matter... I come without guilt I come to break down the walls you built. Steal my hands from my useless shell steal my feet, I know this road so well take away this jealous mind that has caused me to hate take way my feelings before it's to late. It doesn't matter... I come to you with no artificial feelings I come to you forever warm under your wings.Tina Brannon's poem I Dreamt This is amazing, the way that you described the pain that you felt and then the way that you showed the hope that you have is inspiring, I know what it's like to go through this. I love reading your poetry because I can relate to so much of it. You have an awesome talent, and such a good heart, it shows in every word of every single one of your poems, your amazing! Written November 1st, 2001 © on Nov 01 2001 03:29 AM PST, Chauna   0 • 18 • 8

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