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Suicide

By tarnishedheart

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She held it up against her skin loving the way it felt. It seemed like her veins were calling to it, "cut me, set me free". For one instant it almost seemed like she was the only one in the world alive, but she knew that was all about to end. She pressed down and began to feel the pleasurable pain she knew would come eventually, a little more pressure, now she's having second thoughts, she's starting to get dizzy. "oh my God", she thinks, "what have I done"? Then pictures start coming to her, pictures of her life all at once yet in slow motion. She starts to fall and that fst it's all over. She really just liked the way it felt against her skin. Written November 3rd, 2001 © on Nov 03 2001 01:05 PM PST, Chauna   0 • 10

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"She held it up against her skin loving the way it felt. It seemed like her veins were calling to it, "cut me, set me free". For one instant it almost seemed like she was the only one in the world alive, but she knew that was all about to end. She pressed down and began to feel the pleasurable pain she knew would come eventually, a little more pressure, now she's having second thoughts, she's starting to get dizzy. "oh my God", she thinks, "what have I done"? Then pictures start coming to her, pictures of her life all at once yet in slow motion. She starts to fall and that fst it's all over. She really just liked the way it felt against her skin...."

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