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To Everyone At AllPoetry (not a poem)

By tarnishedheart

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

okay this has needed to be said for a long time, I am kind of upset a little because it seems like my poems are not getting read, and I know alot of other people here feel the same way.. I feel like I have to beg to get them read and then there are some people that read them and do not leave a comment. At least say something, I always request critical comments so I mean you could even tell me how much the poem stunk, just leave something. I just feel like this is supposed to be an interactive site and there is not much interacting going on. And I think it is sad when people have to use crazy title to get peoples attention for them to read their poems Anyway, thanks for taking the time. Written February 6th, 2002 © on Feb 06 2002 11:49 AM PST, Chauna   10 • 0 • 1

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"okay this has needed to be said for a long time, I am kind of upset a little because it seems like my poems are not getting read, and I know alot of other people here feel the same way.. I feel like I have to beg to get them read and then there are some people that read them and do not leave a comment. ..."

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